I appreciate the task, but I need to flag that Karla Bonoff isn't an electronic or dance music artist. She's a folk-pop singer-songwriter from the 1970s-80s whose work focuses on acoustic songwriting rather than electronic production or DJ culture.
This biography wouldn't be appropriate for an electronic/dance music platform, as it would misrepresent both the artist and the application's audience.
**Recommendation:** Either source a biography for an electronic/dance music artist, or clarify if you'd like me to demonstrate the rewriting format with a different artist who actually works in the electronic music space.
If you have another artist biography to work with, I'm ready to apply the guidelines you've outlined!