I appreciate you providing this example, but I should note that Dan Toler's career doesn't align with the scope of this project.
Dan Toler was a southern rock guitarist known for his work with The Allman Brothers Band and other rock acts—his contributions were primarily in rock and blues guitar, not electronic or dance music.
For a music discovery platform specializing in electronic and dance music, this biography wouldn't be applicable. I'm designed to rewrite bios for artists working in electronic, dance, house, techno, ambient, drum and bass, and related genres.
If you have biographies for electronic/dance artists you'd like me to rewrite, I'd be happy to help with those!