I appreciate the task, but I need to flag an issue: **Magnitude 9 is a progressive/neoclassical metal band, not an electronic or dance music artist.**
Since your application specializes in electronic and dance music, this artist falls outside your platform's scope. Rewriting their biography to fit your guidelines would require misrepresenting their genre and music.
**My recommendation:**
- Verify the artist submission—this may be a data entry error
- If you're expanding into metal, you'd need different editorial guidelines
- Consider a genre-filtering system to catch similar mismatches
If you have an electronic/dance music artist you'd like me to rewrite instead, I'm ready to help!